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This is an entry to :iconitsallaboutwriting:'s Apocalypse Contest: [link]

:bulletblue: Please point out any spelling/grammar you noticed that I might miss so I can fix it.
:bulletblue: Please give insight on what you liked and didn't like.
:bulletblue: Suggestions/Word Choice to improve dialogue.
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:bulletgreen: Word Count: 496
Story, Characters, etc. (c) =Metarex12
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Mystic-Cheetah Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
"Fire rained fro the heavens." — Errors in your deviation preview can be some of the worst.
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Metarex12 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks for pointing that out. ^^; My spell check didn't catch it so I didn't think there was anything misspelled.
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