This is an entry to
's The Days Before [link]
I hope I was able to keep the character in character.
Please point out any spelling/grammar you noticed that I might miss so I can fix it.
Please give insight on what you liked and didn't like.
Suggestions/Word Choice to improve dialogue.
Suggestions/Word Choice to improve description.
Word Count: 735
Roo, Rachelle, and Setting (c) Land of the Sky & Erika Zaleski/*Iniphineas
Story (c) =Metarex12