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This is an entry to :iconlandofthesky:'s The Days Before [link]

I hope I was able to keep the character in character.

:bulletblue: Please point out any spelling/grammar you noticed that I might miss so I can fix it.
:bulletblue: Please give insight on what you liked and didn't like.
:bulletblue: Suggestions/Word Choice to improve dialogue.
:bulletblue: Suggestions/Word Choice to improve description.

:bulletgreen: Word Count: 735
Roo, Rachelle, and Setting (c) Land of the Sky & Erika Zaleski/*Iniphineas
Story (c) =Metarex12
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owltears Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
TT_TT you did very well!
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Metarex12 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks. ;.;
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