This is an entry to
's "Disney" Prince or Princess Contest: [link]
I hope this is okay since I'm not good with drawing.
This is the beginning where the original leader Tuyet gets captured. Her friend Natal takes over even though he doesn't have the qualities of the leader. It only shows up in the leader and they can only have one leader so unless Tuyet dies no one can truly be leader. Might change names and setting a bit.
Appearance of Tuyet: Orange and blue skin tone with patterns similar to a tiger, orange cat-like pupils to see far away, a small tail, wings, really short hair (almost like she's bald
) with the same color as her body, 6'7", long and sharp nails on her hands and feet, typical clothing would closely with pajamas and has have nothing against wearing the "opposite" gender kind of clothing such as only wearing shorts
Suggestions/Word Choice to improve dialogue.
Suggestions/Word Choice to improve description.
Please point out any spelling/grammar you noticed that I might miss so I can fix it.
Please give insight on what you liked and didn't like.
Word Count: 1,445
Story, Characters, etc. (c) =Metarex12