This is an entry to
's Beta-Reader Match-Making: A Fan Fiction Contest: [link]
An AU of how things will end for Yu-Gi-Oh Zexal, but I'm not saying how it's an AU.
It's a surprise.
Suggestions/Word Choice to improve dialogue.
Suggestions/Word Choice to improve description.
Please point out any spelling/grammar you noticed that I might miss so I can fix it.
Please give insight on what you liked and didn't like.
Word Count: 2,470
Yuma Tsukumo, Vector/Barian/Rei Shingetsu, Astral, Don Thousand, Shark/Ryoga Kamishiro, Kazuma Tsukumo, Kotori Mizuki, Kaito Tenjo, Rio Kamishiro, Akari Tsukumo, Mirai Tsukumo, Haru Tsukumo, Tetsuo Takeda, Takashi Todoroki, Tokunosuke Otomeura, Cathy Catherine, Anna Kozuki, Haruto Tenjo, Orbital 7, Obomi, Droite, Gauche, Tron/Byron Arclight, III/Michael Arclight, IV/Thomas Arclight, V/Chris Arclight, Durbe, Misale, Alit, Gilag, and Setting © Yu-Gi-Oh Zexal, Kazuki Takahashi, & Studio Dice
Story © =Metarex12