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This is an entry to :icontrees-with-character:'s Winter Wonderland Contest: [link]

:bulletblue: Suggestions/Word Choice to improve dialogue.
:bulletblue: Suggestions/Word Choice to improve description.
:bulletblue: Please point out any spelling/grammar you noticed that I might miss so I can fix it.
:bulletblue: Please give insight on what you liked and didn't like.

:bulletgreen: Word Count: 437
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~kaschill7 Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lucky ones typo
beautiful, and i like how it's interesting without having much action in it, which is a very hard thing to accomplish
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=Metarex12 Jan 25, 2013  Student General Artist
:nuu: Hate it when I miss a typo. :) I'm glad you like it.
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~kaschill7 Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i know right? they're so annoying.
:D it's enchanting of course i like it
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=Metarex12 Jan 25, 2013  Student General Artist
:D
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~kaschill7 Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
^.^
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=Metarex12 Jan 25, 2013  Student General Artist
^.^
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~kaschill7 Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
so what's up?
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=Metarex12 Jan 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Trying to work on writing in the small time that my family has alloted me. ^^;
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