This is the prologue and chapter 1 of my novel A.I. The dashes represent the break between the prologue and chapter 1 except for the first set of dashes. Another thing is that at the top of each new break is the person's perspective so in this one it shifts from third-person to David's POV.
Need suggestions for a better title.
Please point out any spelling/grammar you noticed that I might miss so I can fix it.
Suggestions on how to make the beginning a lot more captivating.
Please give insight on what you liked and didn't like.
Word Count for Prologue: 436
Word Count for Chapter 1: 1,144
Total Word Count for this submission:1,580
Total Word Count for Novel: 1,580
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